Notes on Activity & Weight Tracking

Key elements to my approach to a healthy lifestyle: Intermittent Fasting; Why I chose 6:00 am to 2:00 pm to eat; Daily Tracking; Base Lines; My daily fasting routine; Why I do not count calories; Walking, Yoga & Strength; Daily meditation; Flexibility with routine.

Intermittent Fasting

A very comprehensive beginner’s guide to intermittent fasting can be found at Intermittent Fasting 101 — The Ultimate Beginner’s Guide. Here’s the lead in to the article:

  • Intermittent fasting (IF) is currently one of the world’s most popular health and fitness trends.
  • People are using it to lose weight, improve their health and simplify their lifestyles.
  • Many studies show that it can have powerful effects on your body and brain and may even help you live longer.

That’s powerful stuff. I’ve had numerous health challenges over the past couple years. All but my current one, a lung disease called MAC or MAI, is either completely remedied or under control. The medications I’ve been prescribed have seriously affected every aspect of my lifestyle and caused my weight to trend significantly higher.

Intermittent fasting is allowing me to reverse my weight trend and simplify my overall health and fitness. I find I am not usually very hungry anytime in the fasting period. I also find that, as I walk past where I keep nuts, dried fruit, dark chocolate and health bars, I’m thinking about grabbing something. Being part of the IF period, I see this as being in training to avoid constant grazing.

During the IF period I always allow myself something, but try to do it after a little check-in. Keeping some things that are high in fiber, very low or 0% added sugar, low sodium is what I do. A favorite is adding NuttZo to a crispbread, I find it very satisfying:


List and Examine Your Current Medical Issues

Why I chose 6:00 am to 2:00 pm to eat

Typical Breakfast

I love my breakfasts, most of mine are big. It only makes sense, to me, to pick a period that covers a traditional breakfast/lunch or lunch/dinner. I live alone, easy choice for me. Everyone’s circumstances are different. If you have a partner, she/he may or may not want to join the fast. Do whatever works best.

Daily Tracking

I’m unlikely to see big changes from one day to the next, but I track daily for a number of reasons. On my Weight Chart, I’m looking at the moving average trend and identifying what I call Base Lines. Some days I am might expect to see my weight drop some, only to hop on the scales and see a gain. I note what it is I ate. Pasta days can add, but that’s okay, we’re interested in this for the long haul. I record my weight each morning, before having any food or drink, totally naked. My digital scales are accurate to 0.2 lbs. If you do not have digital scales, I suggest to estimate to either 0.25. That might not seem like much, but I’ll show how it’s important later.

Base Lines

About 3 years ago I was borderline obese. I’m 6’2″ and weighed in at close to 250 lbs. I was disgusted with myself and decided to seriously limit my food and alcohol intake, and created monthly spreadsheets with graphs. I wasn’t fasting, but I would make a blender drink every morning with Spiru-tein, which contains 100% of about every vitamin and mineral a body needs to live. Long story short, about 8 months later I was not only below 200 lbs, I was about 192 lbs.

When I looked at the the graphs I saw 4 to 7 day periods that were basically flat lines. The I would trend down, maybe a week or two, and see another flat period. I’m expecting to see those again, they are what I’m calling base lines.

I’ll back edit this in the coming weeks and up what I see as the significance of base lines. Eventually, we’ll hit a base line and our weight will just continue to fluctuate between that base line and the previous one. That’s when we no longer need to continue Intermittent Fasting, we have reached optimal personal body weight.

My daily fasting routine

I try to prepare most of my meals at home. When shopping I essentially only buy organic and pay attention to the Nutrition Facts. Low sodium and sugar, high fiber and the ‘good’ fats. I’ll have more on this, with references, in the coming weeks. For your meals, pick quality that you love. Eat until you are full, have a nice piece of homemade pie or a dish of ice cream, just don’t go overboard.

I see the fasting hours as a training period. I was tending to graze way too often. Now I stop if I am about to reach for a snack, ask myself, if I’m really hungry. The answer is almost always, “no”.

Why I do not count calories – Not a Diet

Ask yourself if you’ve ever seen anyone that has cut calories and lost a dramatic amount of weight and stayed there? I suppose some, but very very few. Each of us is totally different. Some people my height, 6’2″, might be at their optimal personal body weight and be 220 lbs or 170 lbs. I’ll back this up soon, but you’ll never need to count calories to maintain the weight that’s right for you.

Why diets don’t work https://apple.news/Ahi1y-GtMTDGdBAnICyc_Dg

Walking

Walking, no matter how many steps, is not going to lose anyone much weight. Sadly, many of our friends and family just can’t do much. For those of us that still can, it should be an essential part of our daily routine. As I begin this, it’s a formidable challenge for me. I’ll post more soon, the 7600/day steps goal is scientifically selected, I’ll supply references.

Yoga & Strength

[to be added]

Daily meditation

[to be added]

Flexibility with routine

[to be added]

Healthy Eating Links

Possible Articles for Publication

This post and Notes on Activity & Weight Tracking can be references to a number of articles prepared to be submitted for publication. Here are some thoughts for titles:

  • Intermittent Fasting, 4 Weeks to Better Health
  • Intermittent Fasting, 4 Weeks Toward Finding Your Optimal Weight
  • Intermittent Fasting, 4 Weeks to Good Nutrition
  • Intermittent Fasting, 4 Weeks to Uncover Your Hidden Health Issues

Activity & Weight Tracking

Activity & Weight Tracking is part of a Healthy Lifestyle Plan that I am adopting. I want to emphasize, I am not on a diet. I do not believe in diets as a pathway to getting to and maintaining a healthy weight or lifestyle. I do believe that enjoying a healthy lifestyle as we age is far easier if, all things considered, we are close to our own individual optimal personal body weight.

On May 29, 2022 I began daily intermittent fasting, 16-hours, from 2:00 pm to 6:00 am.

Activity & Weight Tracking is part of a Healthy Lifestyle Plan that I am adopting. I want to emphasize, I am not on a diet. I do not believe in diets as a pathway to getting to and maintaining a healthy weight or lifestyle. I do believe that enjoying a healthy lifestyle as we age is far easier if, all things considered, we are close to our own individual optimal personal body weight.

On May 29, 2022 I began daily intermittent fasting, 16-hours, from 2:00 pm to 6:00 am. Over the course of the coming weeks and months I’ll track activities I see as promoting my personal desired lifestyle. One very important measure is allowing my body to tell me when I have reached my optimal personal body weight.

Specifics and references can be found in Notes at the bottom of this post. Comments are very much welcome, thank you.

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Daily Tracking

Week 1 of 4 Weeks of Intermittent Fasting

June 1, 2022
Baby Hens

Weight: 194.0
Steps: 4050/7600
Daily Calm: 20
Wm’s Yoga: 1:00
BP: 126/70 HR: 62

Start of what I hope will be a full month dedicated to establishing a better overall health. I’ll look for improvements in weight – bmi=24.9 –, blood pressure, average steps/day, strength, flexibility, balance and mobility. I’ll have feedback on a lung infection and get a good set of blood tests when possible.

June 2, 2022

Weight: 192.4
Steps: 5316/7600
Daily Calm: 0:20

June 3, 2022

Weight: 190.4
Steps: 1868/7600
Daily Calm: 20
Wm’s Yoga: 1:00

This morning, after about 3 weeks of significant swelling of both ankles, but most especially the right ankle, I see no swelling in either area. I gave myself a pretty good foot massage.

June 4, 2022

Weight: 190.8
Steps: 2848/7600
Daily Calm: 0:30

I’m going slowly on some goals, steps will come. With all parts, it’s important to remain kind to yourself.

One thing I notice is that I rarely feel hungry during my ~18 hr fasting period. Much more, I need to resist the urge to ’snack’. No cheese and triscuits, nachos, cookies, dish of ice cream… I do allow myself something very high fiber, low calories, such as a bowl of popcorn with my nonalcoholic beer. I pop my corn with an excess amount of organic avocado oil. The fat from the oil, for me, makes it unnecessary to add any butter. Very light salt is okay, but I don’t even need it. The high fiber aids digestion and my body feels very satisfied.

I’m in training during the fasting period, Yes, I can resist snacking. Good job, Wm.

June 5, 2022

Weight: 188.6
Steps: 3378/7600
Daily Calm: 20
Wm’s Yoga: 1:10

I’m not on a diet, I pay no attention whatsoever to calories. Two high quality meals a day. Baked or grilled salmon, cod, organic chicken breast, brown rice, leafy green salads, pastas, etc. If I decide I want a dessert, that’s fine. Homemade pie, B&J pistachio, but only a single reasonable serving and never during fasting time.

I scanned Nutritional Facts for my typical daily meals. comes out good. I am restarting 2 vitamin supplements: magnetism caps: 100% daily value; Super B Complex with Vitamin C: overkill as I see it, but smarter minds than mine suggest this is a healthy choice.

June 6, 2022
Sasha

Weight: 189.0
Steps: 4036/7600
Daily Calm: 20
Wm’s Yoga: 1:10
Foot & Body massage: 1:00

I’ve been dog & cat sitting, taking short morning walks — afternoon heat has been oppressive — before yoga. This morning Sasha joined me.

June 7, 2022
Salmon Brussels Rice

Weight: 190.4
Steps: 2508/7600
Daily Calm: 20
Wm’s Yoga: 1:00

Essential part of a healthy lifestyle is good nutrition.

Week 1 – Summary 6/1 to 6/7

  • Weight Start: 194.0 End: 189.6
  • Steps Avg: 3707/day Goal: 7600/day 49% of goal
  • Daily Calm Meditation: 27 min/day
  • Wm’s Yoga: 5 days 5 hrs 20 min
  • Foot & Body massage: 1 hr
  • BP: 129/68 HR: 73 [6/8 reading fairly typical]

Week 2 of 4 Weeks of Intermittent Fasting

June 8, 2022
Dylan change

Weight: 189.6
Steps: 1945/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40
BP: 129/68 HR: 73

This morning marks the first full week of tracking I’ll focus on to see how key activities are trending. On my weight graph I’ll also be looking for what I call Base Lines. These are detailed in my Notes below. Starting today, in addition to a morning meditation, I’ll add and evening one.

June 9, 2022
New Flowering Plant

Weight: 191.4
Steps: 2121/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40
HR: 124 @ 6:00 am

Took 80mg of sotalol to try to get my heart rate down.

June 10, 2022
Breakfast w/Probiotic

Weight: 191.8
Steps: 2617/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40

Typical breakfast is a little different. Along with my eggs I’m likely to include a fermented probiotic, such as the organic sauerkraut. Cottage cheese is good, but I would like to find cultured cottage cheese from raw milk.

June 11, 2022
Antonio in Kerrville

Weight: 190.8
Steps: 1968/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40
Yoga Light: 0:20
BP: 132/73 HR: 79

Grandson Antonio Alexander Villalobos McHone graduates today!

Very dry mouth again at 1:00 am, with HR: 88. I did both the inhalers and I believe, with this new acapella vibratory PEP device supplying far greater volume of the inhalants that that is what I causing the dry mouth.

I’m adding a tracking for I’ll call Yoga Light. On June 5-7 I did 3 consecutive days of Wm’s yoga. Even with being very gentle, I had pulled muscles in my lower back. I intended to give it a couple days, then restart, skipping days between full sessions. I can still feel tenderness in the lower back. Listening to my body.

June 12, 2022
Wm Interval Station

Weight: 191.8
Steps: 2293/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40
BP: 139/70 HR: 66

I’m concerned about BP. For most of the past few years my Blood Pressure has consistently been between 105/65 to 119/75 or there about.

The photo of me is one I snagged on my a short walk this morning, before temperatures again sore to +100º. I have spots I use along a loop to do stretches, toe reps, etc, like interval training loops, just not sophisticated.

On a 2nd, shorter walk, I felt out of breath and could not continue. Fortunately, I could call my brother. Even though I was no more than 150 yards from my cabin, he drove me to the door.

Things happen, being in this fasting period can help sort things out.

June 13, 2022
Daily Calm Consistency

Weight: 193.0
Steps: 3500/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40

The 193 lbs this morning is obviously out of the norm. Obviously, the increase is due to retaining body fluids. My lower legs and ankles are noticeably swollen.

Fortunately, I was scheduled to see my gemologist’s nurse practitioner.

Kim Slimane, Acute Care Nurse Practitioner, gave me a thorough exam and reviewed my current medications. An earlier CT scan showed no significant changes in a lung infection. My breath test was good.

Kim’s review of my medications revealed issues. She felt strongly the dosages had to change. I was taking 20mg of Prednisone – prescribed by my phonologist – twice/day. She reduced this to 10mg twice/day. I was taking 20mg of Furosemide twice/day. This was increased to 40mg twice/day.

Onward…

June 14, 2022

Weight: 190.0
Steps: 2470/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40

Week 2 – Summary 6/6 to 6/14

  • Weight Start: 189.6 End: 190.0
  • Base Line: 190.0 [maybe, see Base Line section of Note on Activity & Weight Tracking]
  • Steps Avg: 2406/day Goal: 7600/day 32% of goal
  • Daily Calm Meditation: 40 min/day
  • Light Yoga: 20 min
  • BP: 135/68 HR: 72

Week 3 of 4 Weeks of Intermittent Fasting

June 15, 2022
Daily Calm Grateful

Weight: 188.2
Steps: 3880/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40

June 16, 2022
Daily Calm - In This Moment

Weight: 189.2
Steps: 5399/7600
Daily Calm: 0:35

June 17, 2022
Fresh Gulf Redfish

Weight: 189.8
Steps: 4144/7600
Daily Calm: 0:35

June 18, 2022
Daily Trip - Whole Body Listening

Weight: 188.8
Steps: 1232/7600
Daily Calm: 0:35
BP: 135/77 HR:85

June 19, 2022
Daily Trip - A Modest Evolution

Weight: 189.2
Steps: 2323/7600
Daily Calm: 0:35

June 20, 2022
Breakfast 6/20/22

Weight: 189.6
Steps: 1932/7600
Daily Calm: 0:35
Wm’s Yoga: 0:45

Trying to get back into some yoga and walking. I think I’m at a Base Line just under 190 lbs. With some strength, extra steps and yoga, I’m expecting to see a slight trending down in weight during week 4.

June 21, 2022
Daily Calm - Breath

Weight: 190.2
Steps: 1632/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40
Free Weights: 0:30

Adding free weights 2-3 times per week. I overdid my Wm’s Yoga and pulled a muscle that disrupted my routine. This time I am being very cautious, starting with very low weights and taking days between.

Week 3 – Summary 6/15 to 6/21

  • Weight Start: 188.2 End: 190.2
  • Base Line: 190.0 {sticking right around 190}
  • Steps Avg: 2933/day Goal: 7600/day 39% of goal
  • Daily Calm Meditation: 32 min/day
  • Light Yoga: 20 min
  • Free weights: 30 min
  • BP: 135/77 HR:85

Week 4 of 4 Weeks of Intermittent Fasting

June 22, 2022
Daily Calm - Criticism

Weight: 192.0
Steps: 2656/7600
Daily Calm: 0:30

I wasn’t prepared to see 192 lbs this morning. However, there is significant swelling in my feet, indicating I am again retaining fluids. I thought I was not getting enough sodium in my diet, but I may have overdone it adding too much salt. I’ll cut that out completely for the bext few days and see if that is the culprit.

June 23, 2022
Grandniece Ruby Franklin

Weight: 189.2
Steps: 1968/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40

My Grandniece, Ruby Franklin, is now both a driver and high school graduate. She can rightfully look forward to a bright future ahead.

June 24, 2022
Scrambled eggs

Weight: 189.2
Steps: 2382/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40
BP: 133/76 HR: 80

Nice baked fresh Gulf Coast redfish for lunch.

June 25, 2022
Pancakes

Weight: 188.2
Steps: 2621/7600
Daily Calm: 0:20
BP: 130/74 HR: 65
Free Weights & Gentle Stretch: 0:30

Back to the low weight for the month. Too soon to know if this will become part of a trend to a lower base line. I’ll be ending the fast after 6/28, but continuing to track, so we’ll see.

I haven’t followed through on nearly as much walking, yoga and strength hours as I feel are strongly needed. However, we all have challenges in our day to day lives, I believe even more strongly in Arthur Ashe’s famous quote:

“Start where you are.
Use what you have.
Do what you can.”

As I’ve stated before, this month is not primarily about weight lose, it is about developing and making a healthy lifestyle plan part of our ongoing day to day lives.

June 26, 2022
Catch me if you can…

Weight: 189.0
Steps: 3666/7600
Daily Calm: 0:35

The little guy was at an afternoon music event, in constant motion, running in 100º heat. Not part of my goals just yet, but I’d sure like to know how many steps he logged in the 2 hours he was there.

I pay attention to, in a learning sort of way, not a concerning way, to small up/down changes in weight from day to day. Yesterday morning was a pancake morning, pretty sizable. Lunch included some leftover pasta. I had an uptick of 0.8 lbs. On 6/25 I weighed in at 188.2, a full 1 lb lower than the previous morning. That was after a more normal breakfast and a nice baked fish for lunch. None of this is enough to change a trend line. However, when I end my fasting it is good to note. I’ll continue some things in moderation, going all in on others.

June 27, 2022
Blackened Fresh Gulf Black Drum

Weight: 188.6
Steps: 4214/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40

Spending the last 2 days of intermittent fasting at Mustang Island State Park, Corpus Christi. I love fresh seafood, so before checking in at my campsite I found a very nice restaurant, Pompanos Seafood House, and had a large lunch. A catch of the day was Black Drum, I chose blackened.

June 28, 2022
Grilled Fresh Gulf Pompano

Weight: 188.8
Steps: 3460/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40

June 29, 2022
Quiche & Eggs at Nester's Corpus Christi

Weight: 190.0
Steps: 3666/7600
Daily Calm: 0:40

Week 4 – Summary 6/22 to 6/29

  • Weight Start: 188.2 End: 190.2
  • Base Line: 190.0 {sticking right around 190}
  • Steps Avg: 2933/day Goal: 7600/day 39% of goal
  • Daily Calm Meditation: 32 min/day
  • Light Yoga: 20 min
  • Free weights: 30 min
  • BP: 135/77 HR:85

Summary 6/1 to 6/29

  • Weight Start: 188.2 End: 190.2
  • Base Line: 190.0 {sticking right around 190}
  • Steps Avg: 2933/day Goal: 7600/day 39% of goal
  • Daily Calm Meditation: 32 min/day
  • Light Yoga: 20 min
  • Free weights: 30 min
  • BP: 135/77 HR:85

Weight Graph with Moving Average

Weight by Day 6/1-29/2022

Notes

Jean Gregory Haskell Poem

My sister Jean was three years older…
And as “big” sisters go, was quite bossy.. I told her!

For you will live on for as long as we do
In the stories and memories that were made up by you.

Jean Gregory Haskell
Thoughts & Words by Helen Gregory McHone
Put to verse by Pam Kelley Brush

My sister Jean was three years older…
And as “big” sisters go, was quite bossy.. I told her!
For example one time when I was just ten
She told me to learn a song and then –
She told me I must sing it for dad and mom
while she played the music and strummed along
on her NEW guitar.

The song was called
My Pretty Red wing”,
I was terrified. I did not want to sing!
But Jean let me know that I had no choice
I would sing that song in my very best voice
So though I was nervous.
Of her I was in AWE!
And I knew whatever she said was the LAW!
So sing it I did and it all went well
Mom and Dad loved it. We both could tell.

But as we grew older the age gap grew smaller.
We had husbands and kids. every day I would call her.
She was so outgoing – the adventurous kind
Yet with a young boys she would always find time
…for Barbara and me.

Barbara was our younger sister
A real Auntie Mame!
The one in the family with fortune and fame
She worked overseas but would visit us yearly
And bring each of us gifts. We all loved her dearly!

Barbara died in 2000 We all felt the pain
But our love for her will always remain..
..Deep in our hearts.
I know you met Jean in the moment she died
to take her with you, to the other side.
I miss you both but I’m trying to be brave
So for heaven’s sake please try to behave…
Til I get there!!

I miss you dear Jean. I wish I could go
To your special memorial, I do love you so.
But somehow I got older. Long trips mate me ill.
But I’ll be there in spirit. You know that I will.
For you loved San Diego. The west coast was for you.
But you missed autumns back here. I know that to be true.
You came back to visit one year in the fall
we took a trip back in time and we both had a ball!
You leave A wonderful sons and their families behind
We all really miss you. You were one of a find.
A truly great sister, and a fabulous mother
An auntie deeply loved, unlike any other.
Kurt, Kris, Karl and Kevin too
will always be a tribute to you.

For you will live on for as long as we do
In the stories and memories that were made up by you.

Love you forever Jean.

Helen

The Cookie Jar

Cousin Kim,

Perhaps no physical object goes further back into my childhood memory than my grandmother’s cookie jar. The one I remember was the same shape and lid style as the one shown here.

Grandma’s Cookie Jar

It didn’t take a 3 or 4 year old long to realize every trip to grandma’s found fresh baked cookies waiting, all the way to the top of the jar.

My mother sometimes took us 4 young children by train from Schenectady to visit my grandmother in her childhood home in Port Henry. Normally my father would load us on the train, drive up a week or so later, then drive us all back. I had taken that train ride often enough to know every stop. I would call them out, along with the conductor, as he came through, “Ticonderoga, Crown Point, Port Henry…”. He always gave me a big smile.

This time was different. While my father was at work, my Aunt Barbara brought us to the station. We never returned south again. My grandmother’s house became our home.

In Port Henry, my grandmother awaited us. Arriving in her driveway, I immediately ran into the house to the pantry. A 7 year old, just tall enough to reach up, lift the lid, my favorite oatmeal, walnut, raisin cookie soon in hand.

Cookie Jar
Hilary’s Cookie Jar

Daughter Hilary hosts a monthly “baking day”. Open invitations to friends are extended to stop by. Fresh baked cookies continue to appear and disappear throughout the afternoon. When Hilary began looking for a cookie jar, she did so with great care. A special container for any leftovers.

Fresh baked cookies continue to take on a special significance to me, a food that serves not only the palate, but the soul. Some might not see a connection between grandmother’s cookie jar and Hilary’s. I feel an ethereal connection.

I’m curious to know if any physical objects you recall from your early childhood stand out in a way that might be similar to what I feel about an old cookie jar.

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Yukon – First Words

Good morning my friend,

I’ve chosen to write these First Words to you for many reasons. Although I am unable to recall our first meeting, I am able to note that there is no single friend I have had that I can trace further back throughout adulthood. Reason enough to seek your help in my newest endeavor. Real reasons are often complex, I trust they’ll be revealed. I’ll start with your unique ability to cut through the everyday bullshit. Our world, as seen through you my friend, is hidden from those that make it what is and, perhaps more importantly what it is not.

A main focus of this blog, WhereIDwell.net, is intended to be Letters Written and Answered, in the style of hand written letters. I might rightly say this is a beginning. Although I had no way of knowing it at the time, this began in the shadows of that first day you and I met in the late 1960’s.

You were Frank when we first bonded. I was newly wed, a father sooner than expected. Not long after, I was among the first you told that you would also become a husband and father sooner than planned. We took jobs at the local IBM plant. We both attended UVM, you graduating. Me, well just say I’m in contention for most credit hours without that parchment I could hang on my wall.

That life, a safe one, wasn’t meant for you, and it wasn’t meant for me. We kind of drifted off in our own directions. When you surfaced again, I heard you were off to Alaska. Folks were calling you Yukon.

You became Yukon Frank.

I thought to myself, if only Yukon might help me as Saku helped him make a little sense to the world in which I dwell.

So I’m seeking your help. No timetables. No rules. Answer questions with other questions, or answer them not at all. We owe no one explanations. What I do trust is that there is great depth to our common overlapping history.

What might we uncover from that history?

Please join me on the journey.

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Letters Written & Answered

Write your last creative piece to submit online. Combine poetry and prose in an experimental piece. Use the principles we have covered this semester.

”Letters Written & Answered” is a major category in WhereIDwell.news, a blog still in development. What follows here is being submitted as a ”Final piece of writing” for Dr. Kathleen Hudson’s Creative Writing Class.

Dr. Kathleen Hudson
Dr Kathleen Hudson

This is an actual photo taken during class. Look carefully, you can almost hear a main principle — as I am hearing at this very moment — coming from Dr. K’s lips, ”SNAG THE MOMENT”. It’s 12:53 AM, I’m snagging it!

Subcategories of Letters Written & Answered in Where I Dwell are broadly grouped as:

Physical Dwelling: Our homes, communities, country…

Personal Dwelling: When our minds take us to friends, family, health challenges, careers…

Ethereal Dwelling: Merriam-Webster defines ethereal as:

  • of or relating to the regions beyond the earth
  • celestial, heavenly
  • unworldly, spiritual
  • lacking material substance

This assignment is intended to become part of an explanation of the focus of the Letters Written & Answered category. An example of a letter I wrote and posted previously, When God is Created by Man, can be found is available for review on my blog created for this class. I place this squarely in the ethereal subcategory.

My poetic contribution tries to show where my writing is taking me…

Where I Dwell

In a night filled with mad passion,
Egg & Sperm first met.
264 nights later,
I chose to offload.

I came out screaming,
Turning a mother’s pain to joy
4 walls enough for me
Wm’s cabin, my Physical abode.

What day, what hour is not filled
With thoughts that drift to those we love?
Our family, our friends
Even those that may cause grief and harm

May thoughtful letters written
Become welcome letters received
Freeing mind, body and spirit from
States of Personal alarm

Far deeper thoughts arrive unannounced
Oft times as a dream in a dark night
Or wandering along a stream, a forest path
A place, a time, no one can tell

Letters Written & Received
Transcendentally from an unknown abode
Evoke thoughts of eternity
In which to Ethereally Dwell

From the class, this piece forms a basis for another strong principle. That is, we all have stories worthy of telling and the ability to tell those stories in compelling ways. Throughout these past 6 weeks we have been given the confidence to trust in ourselves to share those stories.

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A 76 Year Old Returns to College

This 76 year old returns to college to take Dr. Kathleen Hudson’s Creative Writing class to develop story writing skills. It’s felt like most of my stories have been locked behind some doorway, deep inside my brain. I hoped developing those skills would become the key to unlocking that doorway.

Before class started, I created a blog, WhereIDwell.net. I bought a $110 Apple Pencil, which I intended to use taking class notes directly on my iPad. Back at my cabin, where I physically dwell, over a glass of wine, I would edit, add links and transfer those notes to my blog.

One story, still in the writing practice stage, takes place when I worked for IBM. A few times a year, one or two employees from sites across the U.S. would be selected to attend IBM’s highly regarded Systems Research Institute. At that time, SRI was located on East 42nd St in Manhattan. Over 10 weeks, college graduate level courses in systems architecture, computer science, math and logic, were taught by respected PhDs. I was honored to be one of those attendees.

On our first day we were given a group orientation, the kind of advice that sticks in your head.

An instructor told us, there are two types of people, ”BE’ers” and ”SEE’ers”.

He then drew a huge outline of Manhattan on a white board. Scattered dots all over the island. Those dots represented safe areas. He said, “pay close attention, trust the hairs on the back of your necks getting from one safe area to another. Those safe areas are constantly changing”.

Today I see that as a metaphor pertaining to writing stories. Those dots may trigger memories or the inspiration for stories, poetry, song… all writing. They can appear anywhere, even in a place we’ve never noticed them before.

As Writers, I see us constantly shifting between ”BE’ers” and ”SEE’ers”. Yes, we must remain close observers, but in our writing, we also must BE what we SEE.

Well, I didn’t end up using my $110 Apple Pencil, I used pen and notebook. I did have those glasses of wine.

Dr. Kathleen Hudson, during these 6 short weeks, you have shown me that doorway inside my brain has always been open.

You’ve provided an amazing list of guest speakers.

Class time, required reading, assignments and, in very large degree, my fellow students, have combined to convinced me, we all have amazing stories to tell.

My stories, of course are written for me. But I also know, once completed, I have Something of Value to leave for those that come after me, along with the confidence that I will tell my stories in compelling ways.

Kathleen, from the bottom of my heart…

Thank You,

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If You Want to Write – Notes

Notes on “If You Want to Write”, by Brenda Ueland

As I read this book I’ll be adding personal thoughts the book generates. I’ll also add direct quotes with page references. From time to time I’ll review my entries and highlight those that are most significant to me.

Chapter 1 – Everybody is Talented, Original and Has Something Important to Say

p. 21 The imagination works slowly and quietly.

p. ??? “Freed them from the clouds of automatic verbiage.”

When I spent the summer of 1963 in southern California after high school graduation, I was in a small apartment. Young neighbor girls had seen me. They came to the door one day, “come see our play”. I did, it was alive with their young imaginations. It was impossible not to be drawn into their excitement, their world, I loved it. One girl took me to meet her big sister, who was supposedly watching them. She was sunning herself in “an itsy-bitsy, teeny-weeny, yellow polka dot bikini”. A little added reward for being a good audience.

p. ? If you have no friend to encourage you, invent one. {I write emails to Jesse Wyeth. At some point I’ll post some to Letters Written and Answered}

p. ? Practice with all your intelligence and love.

Practice - Vince Lombardi

p. ? Write to understand your own feelings better.

p. 33 A walk a little too long releases creative thoughts by placing you fully in the moment. The thoughts come slowly, little inward bombs bursting quietly. Once the creative thoughts come, write them, but do not grind them by endlessly rewriting, striving for perfection. Let them be, make room for more.

Chapter 6 – When you write, write in the moment, that is, write what you are feeling deep inside. Don’t write at or about something, write from within it. Others, when reading, will feel what you are feeling. p.42 “In other words, it is when you are really living in the present – working, thinking, lost, absorbed in something you care about very much, that you are living spiritually.”

This writing in the moment, becoming lost, totally absorbed, comes most often for me when I’m writing to someone, someone I care deeply about.

Chapter 9 p. 60 – Example of my preceding bold text…

“The sound of the wind grew louder, and I raised myself on my elbow and looked out. Yes, it was blowing hard. A rooster, looking very silly his feathers all this-way-and-that, scurried across the yard toward the comfort of the coop.” [from an excerpt by Elsa Krouch]

This goes on, I’m transported into that moment, place and time. That’s what I want from my writing. That’s what I take from this book.

Ueland write of the excerpt:

” This writing, you see, is very beautiful. It is impossible to cut it. I try to take out a sentence here or there, but cannot bring myself to do it. They are all too good and necessary and contribute too much. And so it is with Art, literature, belles lettres, or whatever you want to call it.”

belles-lettres meaning: essays, particularly with literary and artistic criticism… French phrase meaning ‘beautiful’ or ‘fine’ writing.

Interesting here, to me, is the use of a single quote around a word or phrase. I use this quite often in my writing or comments on Facebook when I either cannot, or do not want to, use bold letters or italics to emphasize.

p. 73 – Think of telling a story, not of writing it.

Chapter XIV

Whatever you write will reveal your personality, and whatever you are will show through your writing.

Chapter XVI

Use your imagination.

Ueland’s last line…

And if it [this book] has given you the impulse to write one small story, I am pleased.

I want to just briefly add, something that Brenda Ueland did in her book revealed to me a great deal about Brenda Ueland the person. She truly cared about her readers and students. Throughout the book, she not only pulled from hundreds of examples of writers that were examples of what she was telling us, she also wrote in the style that pulled me into a belief that what she was telling me was, in fact, the truth.

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Writers Conference – Presentation

On what became a memorable night, not long after we first met, JB and I went to a little bar in Old Town Manassas, Virginia. Those of us here of a certain age will remember the name of the aging lead singer that night, Gary Lewis was performing live.

Schreiner University has announced its annual Texas Writers Conference and the Coffeehouse Series performance by Christopher “Rooster” Martinez. Both events will be free and open to the public.

The events will take place on April 13, with the Texas Writers Conference held from 3-5 p.m. in the Junkin Family Ministry Center on the Schreiner campus, and the Coffeehouse Series performance, which will be from 7-9 p.m. at the Trailhead Beer Garden outdoor stage at Schreiner University, 2100 Memorial Blvd.

Notes and a link for my presentation at the Trailhead follow…

My name is William, William McHone. For me, becoming a writer means becoming a story teller. On a Valentine’s Day, many years ago, I left a note to a special friend. I took to calling Jennifer Beckwith, JB. I wrote many notes to JB, always signing them with a scripted Wm. JB took to calling me Wmmm.

On what became a memorable night, not long after we first met, JB and I went to a little bar in Old Town Manassas, Virginia. Those of us here of a certain age will remember the name of the aging lead singer that night, Gary Lewis was performing live.

This is a bit of flash fiction, for me a flash memory.

I call it JB – The Night We Danced

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